That almost looks like someone keyed the car. I wouldn't want that on my car. Unless you get a picture of the whole car then maybe I can make a better judgement.
The tint and calipers I am very happy with.... Painting the calipers was one of the best things I've done for the appearance of the car so for (ok, so it's also about the only thing I've done... but I still like it a lot.)
They charge you extra for that? I skipped purchasing a yellow MP3 (had only 7 miles on it at the time!) from one dealer because it had pinstripes on and the dealership was planning on charging $200 extra for that thing.