NVP5White said:I don't like to tell guys this, but...your sister is hot. She has a photogenic face, at least. I'd take some more of her to practice your focusing skills.
Other pics are nice, but you need to work on composition. I think some of the locations are nice but something is lost in those last few pictures.
Don't worry about saying my sister is hot, it doesn't bother me like it would bother most guys. That pic we were just sitting on the subway and she just started making faces when i pointed the lens at her and thats what I got. She is going into theatre and is an aspiring actress so she damn well better have a photogenic face. If I can get out to Chicago more often or when she comes home I can get her to a studio and I can practice there.
I hear ya on the other 2. The heart in the sand and the pathway don't really stand out to me. If it wasn't so cold when i was out, I would've thought about better composition.