it is hard to see, and its a bad pic...its not kinked in any way i assure you i was really concerned about that! and btw whoever asked its not just laying there (hand)YP5 Toronto said:Mathew.....its hard to see from this angle....but the only thing I would Strongly recommend is that the oil return line be "less kinked"... the oil should have the shortest route into the oil pan.
Maybe shorten the line up a bit...and get an "angle" fitting out of the oil pan. (also the position on the oil pan itself could be a "bit" higher)
You have done some great work...and it looks great.. this would be my only advice.