Any photographers in here?

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Great shots from everybody in here! been lurkin on this thread too long and decided to start putting stuff up to get some real feedback, you know besides from relatives.

here are some from a roadtrip i took thanksgiving weekend..
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camera: sony dsc-f828 8mp
 
much thanks! i love doing panoramas. will try and get more up but most of them will probably be too skinny and long too post..
 
im tempted to see what you guys think of this picture, its a portrait of my girlfriend i took last year and re-edited the other day, enjoy
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Well, you have a very hot girlfriend, so good work there. Only critiques I would have is all the negative space you have above her head and that you cut off her hand. Otherwise, good lighting and good posing of the subject.
 
Well, you have a very hot girlfriend, so good work there. Only critiques I would have is all the negative space you have above her head and that you cut off her hand. Otherwise, good lighting and good posing of the subject.

yeah, poorly framed/cropped, other than that, looks good, love the bokeh.
 
I agree with the above. Also her arm seems disjointed in that position. My eye starts to focus on the shoulder and not her face.
 
I don't like that extra skin on her elbow. Make sure when you take portraits, hands and limbs need to look relaxed..even if they're not. And yes...it looks disjointed or something. Shoulder is too high. work on that composition and the dead space
 
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