With this shot...try moving the horizon up or down and not have it in the middle. THis way it will either show more sky or more ground and in turn will add depth.
hi thought id drop in and show a few from my girlfriend with KrayolaImagery
<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/69766646@N07/6656001249/" title="capitol 1 by INeedMoarLow, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7025/6656001249_7fcb86148d.jpg" width="333" height="500" alt="capitol 1"></a>
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all photos taken with nikon d3100 with the 18-55mm lens
1st photo taken by FletcherFotography edited by KrayolaImagery
2nd photo taken and edited by KrayolaImagery
Here are a few images from my first time shooting with the Alien Bees with a model. She's into comic books, video games, Japanese pop culture, hence the Batman knee-high socks and Superman tee
Canon 5D MKII with Canon 70-200 2.8L IS
Alien Bees B800 with 22" white beauty dish with a 30 degree reflector
Same strobe setup as above except with a B800 aimed at the background on these two images below