I'd like to see #4 color corrected, and 11-13 cropped to a wide format. They look very nice!
One more thing: if you can, the next time you go to that spot in #7, grab a velvet rope, a big bouncer-looking guy, and get some friends to dress up like they are waiting to get into a club. That's what I picture with that door on the left. Keep the composition the same, just add the people. Maybe a red carpet, too. That would be calendar material.